"It is very clear and effective. The eyes stand out which makes it look very scary and menacing."
"Really like the strip which features other horror movies. They're modern and establishes the genre."
"I love the effect (contacts) on the eyes, it really draws the viewer in and allows me to interpret the film as psychological horror. Her eyes connote possession."
Our teacher said that the original barcode was quite fake as we used one that looked like this.
The numbers are in chronological order which was quite unrealistic so I decided to look for a better and more believable barcode to use for our magazine. Also, the text on the edge of the banner towards the bottom of the page, looks quite confusing as there are some numbers on the image which clash with the text saying "Paranormal Activity". To improve this I will take out the numbers on the image to make it look effective. The website was also too bold and he decided that the opacity should be decreased to make it less obvious. One last thing he suggested is that we added the date for the magazine. e.g. 'February 2015'. This notifies the readers of what issue they are looking at.

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